ПЛИЗ !Сделайте письмо ** англ. языке ,приглашение к себе в город

Question

ПЛИЗ !
Сделайте письмо на англ. языке ,приглашение к себе в город

Answer 1

Hi, ****! Do you want to go in my town? This is city isn't big, but there are some places, where we can enjoy. We can go to the cinema, park or, may be, cafe. Please, write me back! I'm looking forward to see you here!
Best wishes,
*****


***** — имена на ваши усмотрение.

Comments

Many thanks!!!!

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this is city isn't big- не правильно, пишут this city isn't big

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после or в данном случае запятая не нужна

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и после maybe тоже не ставим запятую.а так остальное в норме)

Answer 2

НЕ ПРАВИЛЬНО!

Dear,Ann!
I'm writing because i want to invite you in my town! My town is green with different beautiful streets, parks, museums, cinema, galery. i wish you could visit it on your holidays. i will show you the best parts.
with best wishes,
your (имя)